I was about to say that you ripped off LF
But after 2 seconds of research, I saw that he was involved so maybe I'll keep my instant opinion to myself....
I liked it, the first half has the same feel to it as LegendaryFrog's version in 2005. (That long ago?! FUCK I'm old now) I'm not implying you stole it from him, I'm just saying that it followed the video game storyline as he did with some jokes thrown in on the side. This is not a bad thing, just a comment.
But the second half had its own humour and shine about it, I'm glad you took it off track from the main storyline and gave it your own personal take on things.
I eagerly away part deux